P3

Feedback 

1. Fill in the empty space on the posters. 

2.  Add more details of the event on the posters. For example, artist names or what brands will be there.


These are the changes I made:

BEFORE

AFTER

After the feedback I got, I changed the poster to be more interesting and informing to the viewer by adding the performing artist's names, and a big cloud of smoke in the middle to fill the space. 

BEFORE

AFTER 

I also changed the flyer to be more eye catching by changing the text size and colour to be more contrasting. 

BEFORE 

AFTER 

I also slightly changed the polo shirt designs by making the white one black, in order to give it more contrast. 

Rationale

First of all I made the poster and the flyer simple, so people can see them clearly, close, or from fairly far away. The poster and flyer are made to come across cartoonish, as they will appeal more to the target audience because they are young and more attracted to simple bright posters. 

The clothing was made like that to also match the target audience. The simple designs on them like the poster and flyer, appeal more to a younger audience, as simple designs are currently the most popular when it comes to clothing at the moment.